Thursday, February 18, 2010

The sharks’ revenge.
By: Clayton Smit
Once upon a time there was a species of animal called “shark”. They were many kinds, almost four hundred! The species was kind and generous. Their reef was colorful and marvelous. But some animals didn’t know how to be a good person. And there names were crab and octopus. So here are the bad guys, crab and octopus.
“So what do you want to do today?” asked crab. “I don’t know, maybe spray paint the homeless shelter?” replied octopus “Sounds like fun, lets go!” As they got the supplies for trouble and madness. But before they got to the shelter, some sharks came up and said “Hi. Nice day ah?” said the sharks. Crab just gave a weird smile and Octopus just ignored the sharks. The sharks sensed something fishy, some they fallowed. The sharks turned a corner and saw that the Evil gang was spraying “YOU ARE PATHATIC!” But the sharks gasp and the Crab noticed them and he said “They are spying on us! Spray them with your ink, and distract them, then we can spray their fins and throw the cans at them!” And Octopus did, and the disgraceful duo scurried away smirking with an evil face on both of these horrible creatures.
Then some cops came (as dolphins) and looked in surprise at the writing on the wall, the sharks with the evidence that they did the crime. But the dolphins didn’t know that the sharks were innocent, and said “Sharks, causing a crime? That is crazy talk! But it is a crime, so we haft to arrest them.”
At the court the judge convicted them guilty, and to a life time of hatred. From every living thing on earth. For ever on all sharks forever. The sharks got so angry that they wanted revenge on all animals. And you wonder why sharks are eating most animals in the ocean, well, now you know



THIS IS THE END

1 comment:

  1. That's a really good story, but Sharks aren't once upon a time. You put, "Once upon a time, there was a species called 'shark'" That's not true. Also, maybe a little better word choice.

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